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Post by Seroquel on Jul 20, 2018 20:32:45 GMT -8
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Post by Alec Weesner on Jul 21, 2018 6:29:22 GMT -8
If I were to say the #1 thing for you to work on, it would be variance in your song structure. The intro leading into the verse is interesting, but there is nothing else like it in the rest of the song.
I will say that your panning is improving a lot. Definitely better than your earlier works.
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Post by artistirreal on Sept 11, 2018 10:44:09 GMT -8
The rhythm feels a bit repetitive, the melody too, but that title resonates with me haha.
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