Chris
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Post by Chris on Jun 27, 2018 21:46:33 GMT -8
The ending of Voltron Season 6, and this picture of Tracy Caldwell Dyson inspired me to compose something that sounds like an epic journey back home through outer space. Let me know what you think, and thanks for listening!
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Post by Seroquel on Jun 27, 2018 21:58:13 GMT -8
Another very effective piece from you.
My only minor nitpick is that the "sparkle" noise at the 10 second mark is kinda cheesy.
But that's really it.
Good job.
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Post by Chris on Jun 27, 2018 23:23:48 GMT -8
Another very effective piece from you. My only minor nitpick is that the "sparkle" noise at the 10 second mark is kinda cheesy. But that's really it. Good job. Hey man, these bad boys are like the sound of outer space   also thanks |
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Post by Alec Weesner on Jun 28, 2018 17:51:22 GMT -8
Excellent use of both organic and synthetic instruments. I kind of agree with Seroquel about the chimes, but I more think that they are too loud rather than out of place. I love how the melody instrument shifts to radically different instruments, such as from flute, to choir, to strings, brass, and then finally the ethnic instrument at the end.
The portamento at 1:00 was a beautiful transition. I also noticed that you kept the music intriguing during the breaks in the melody by adding small flourishes of other instruments.
Nicely done, Chris.
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