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nenopro
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New home Aug 18, 2018 9:49:03 GMT -8

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Post by nenopro on Aug 18, 2018 9:49:03 GMT -8

Hi folks, last month i was watching the netflix tv show ,,Lost in Space'' and i was inspired with the story, the characters and the original music itself, so i wrote my recent piano composition ,,New home''. The original idea was to write orchestral tune for small orch. but i've decided to do that (maybe) in the future, with better conditions and equipement.

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Sheet: exit.sc/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdrive.google.com%2Fopen%3Fid%3D1Y-XdADgy48r4oUV4haLMq4b0QBI8lyIy

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Chris
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New home Aug 19, 2018 21:59:52 GMT -8

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Post by Chris on Aug 19, 2018 21:59:52 GMT -8

I love lost in space!

Anyway a few things about the piano version:

• Definitely could use some reverb and sustain pedal

• The staccato parts sound pretty machine-gun like

• Your chords are a bit too loud and obscuring the melody

• I'd say the tune feels like it lacks cohesion and thematic development.

It's definitely headed in the right direction, style-wise though!

nenopro New Member Posts: 23	New home Aug 20, 2018 4:32:01 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by nenopro on Aug 20, 2018 4:32:01 GMT -8 Thank you for the suggestions.I've tried in humanization in Cubase (note lenghts, positions...) still learning, will be better in the future as i progress.
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adlib
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New home Aug 20, 2018 10:10:02 GMT -8

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Post by adlib on Aug 20, 2018 10:10:02 GMT -8

Enjoyed it!! I think the chord progression particularly from 0:47 seconds is very clever! Only think I would say (basically reiterating what Chris said) - but the staccato in particular is a bit disjointed and uneven sounding (I'm assuming this is all played in live?) Are all the notes quantised etc? Otherwise, keep it up, sounding good

nenopro New Member Posts: 23	New home Aug 20, 2018 13:01:35 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by nenopro on Aug 20, 2018 13:01:35 GMT -8 Thank you sir. No, it is not played live, i tried to simulate ,,live playing'' so maybe i went to far.
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